My 100 word challenge

Jeffory (who had money burning a hole in his pocket)  entered an antique shop when his eye was drawn to a whistle in the window . A man sat quietly in the corner of the small room… lifeless with no emotions


“Just buy what you want and get out.”

Confused, Jeffory went to the window reaching for the whistle.

“How  much?”


“I only have £24.99”

“I’ll take it… just get it out!”

Out on the busy street he looked at the whistle. A whistle blew and everyone disappeared on the street, he was confused…

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